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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
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0 posted 2008-03-10 09:04 PM



Just My Luck

I want to feel the warmth
Of your strong arms around me
Your passionate kisses on my soft lips
Even have our initials carved deep into a tree

I want your handsome face
To wake up in the morning next to
Smiling joyfully back at me
Telling me that we'll never be through

I want the comfort of your voice
To tell me it’s going to be alright
Put your arms all the way around me
And hold onto me long and tight

I want you to be that Some-One-Special
I can share with my secret feelings
Someone who can help me
With all of life’s dealings

I want you to be someone I can talk to
Until the sun rises up
But I know this won’t happen
Because that’s just my luck…


[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (03-10-2008 10:15 PM).]

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Talyn
Junior Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 47
North Carolina, USA
1 posted 2008-03-10 11:20 PM


Very nice,
I really liked it.
I can relate to how you feel, longing for that someone.

Talyn

"Gang aft a-gley,
an lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
for promised joy"
--Robert Burn

effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-03-11 01:50 PM


There you go again, is impatience your middle name? Jess all good things come to pass...it must be true 'cos I just said so, right?  Have agood day & BTW, you are getting real good at writing & expressing your self....John
  


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-03-11 05:11 PM


Nice to see a picture up!


ARCTIC WIND

ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
GA
4 posted 2008-03-11 11:03 PM


thanks. im the one on the right
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