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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
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0 posted 2008-03-10 05:38 PM


The Last Day

The last day
You and I were together
You took me to the movies
And gave me a cute letter

We were holding hands
With my head up against you
It felt like my day
Was starting over, completely new

But then something happened
You let go of my hand
You held my arms down
And wouldn’t let me stand

I tried to get away from you
You started to touch me down there
I started to scream because
That is one thing I cannot bear

You finally let go
I hit you in the face
That is one bad memory
I never again want to retrace

© Copyright 2008 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-03-10 05:40 PM


Knee in groin works way better than slap in face, next time you see him try it out........ J
ILoveTheRain
Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
GA
2 posted 2008-03-10 05:42 PM


lol He moved to Florida. So he's faaarrr away now. Thank god.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-03-11 02:34 PM


Smart girl, Rain.
           Ida

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-03-11 05:12 PM


Very smart move! lol



ARCTIC WIND

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