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Talyn
Junior Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 47
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2008-03-10 03:42 PM


For this I went to Dictionary.com and looked up the synonyms for 'missing' then filled in my feelings.




Main Entry:  missing


Definition:  absent
Synonyms:


The pain you leave me with when your away,

those Tears I cry are not gone, its everyday now.

You disappeared,

with me feeling left behind,

Im lacking your presence,

I feel lost.

How misplaced I feel,

Your not present.

Like you've omitted from my life,

but never removed from my heart.

Your unaccounted for in my everyday life,

with me left here wanting your love.


Talyn

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effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-03-10 03:45 PM


Talyn,  this is sad, I hope you feel better soon, BTW welcome to Passions, I forgot to say that in your other post...John
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-03-10 03:46 PM


"You're" unaccounted for in my everyday life.
You are not the only poet here who makes this mistake. It is quite common I notice. Welcome to the site, Talyn. (pretty name)
                                   Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (03-11-2008 01:14 AM).]

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