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simon
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since 2008-01-14
Posts 440
London, England

0 posted 2008-03-10 01:08 PM


This isn't intended to be a representation of my own personal beliefs or those of any individual. But those that I perceive to be held by society as a whole (how pretentious am I?)

Earlier

God knows everything
God is never wrong
He can sing along to every single song
And he's seen every scene
Of every film
That's ever been made.

And when He gets paid
He's a demon on the quiz machine
Down the arcade.

He is all seeing and all knowing
So if you've got a problem about
Who you might be being
Or where you might be going?
Ask God
God'll put you straight
There is no ego
That He can't deflate
God is Great.

God knows everything
God is never wrong
And I could go on and on and on.
But I won't.

Later

God is old and grey.
It was never like this in His day
He blames the Government
Someone should make them pay.

What will happen to all the poor kiddies
Born into this World?
What happened to all the morals and the values
That He held?

God is grey and old
God is cold
God is poor,
It's not safe for Him
To go out anymore.

If only He were two Millennia younger.

© Copyright 2008 Simon parr - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-03-10 02:47 PM


Simon,

God is safe here in the hood, where he romps around quite nicely.

Cute poem.

Bobby

Balladino
Junior Member
since 2008-03-06
Posts 18
Prehistorical
2 posted 2008-03-10 03:12 PM


Interesting write. There is truth in it.
enjoyed the read.

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
3 posted 2008-03-10 03:19 PM


I need to wrestle with this one for a little while longer, mind holding on to my amazing technicolour dream coat Simon?  Very good, nice to see you sticking with it. Yours is one of the names I look for when I log on...thanks for keeping me laughing, I was going to write & tell my brother about you but they wont let us have anything sharp in here.....
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