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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2008-03-10 10:58 AM


So early he calls,
repeating notes before light
has risen high into
dreaming minds of people.
Difused light and murk
mornings merging in starkness.
From dreams she peeps
far off from his
perching pedestal, listening to
his love pride cast
onto the wind, carried
to her senses to
quicken her breast, begining
her own thoughts of
jostling nestlings clamouring with
sun bathing their faces
and joy of pride
tingling through every part
of her living being.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-03-10 11:30 AM


Phil, this was exquisite. ~ A birdie love poem of the highest order.

"listening to
his love pride cast
onto the wind, carried
to her senses to
quicken her breast"

~ So utterly tweet! I mean, "sweet".

I also appreciated the ambiance that you so poetically created!

Smiling here
Linda

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2008-03-10 11:38 AM


Linda..even birds feel love...otherwise why do the males sing? Why have such richness and variety to their calls if they were not thinking of the one(s) that they send their love calls to? And why do the females listen if they do not want to be impressed? They want to hear his love call..it is the precursor to the race of life..

Thank you for your kind words..

God bless..

Goldenrose

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-03-10 11:42 AM


Very nice, Phil
Goldenrose
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4 posted 2008-03-10 11:45 AM


March..thank you for your kindness..

Peace be with you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

vandana
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5 posted 2008-03-10 11:59 AM


good read
Goldenrose
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6 posted 2008-03-10 12:14 PM


Vandana..thank you for your words..

Peace be with you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-03-10 01:31 PM


simply excellent!

v. serious, sustained applause!!

Goldenrose
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8 posted 2008-03-10 02:01 PM


Bruce.. to have excellent from an excellent writer as you is praise indeed..thank you..

Peace be with you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

Margherita
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9 posted 2008-03-10 07:27 PM


quote:
sun bathing their faces
and joy of pride
tingling through every part
of her living being.



You captured this tune of love very beautifully with your sensitive heart, dear Phil.

Love,
Margherita

Goldenrose
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10 posted 2008-03-11 04:43 AM


Margherita...when the male still calls his love tune and listens for an answer but none is forthcoming, then his heart is sick..but one day a reply will come back and fill his heart with love to make him sing with joy again..thank you for your kind words as always..

Peace be with and God bless..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

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