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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2008-03-10 10:53 AM



Ascend of a human
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(To margarita)

A yellow star with love and power shines.
Rays are all I need at this moment of
Cactus grown on the uterus of mind.
To the sun I rise from the sea of white.
Depressions are dense water fathomless.
From my hair the salt of grief dropping still.
Golden sand spreads a promised land to rest.
Nostril flows with light smell of fish and boats.
I remove the embrace of sea-algae.
The sand alone witness the love’s ascend
And, air brings the white cloth as my cover.

Welcome me. I am human again.

clever talks delay friendship!

© Copyright 2008 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
Posts 353
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1 posted 2008-03-10 11:16 AM


So beautifully soft tuned. To our dearest lady
You are a very kind poet. my dear friend.
Love thins one. Very tender.

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
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2 posted 2008-03-10 03:34 PM


I am sure Margherita will smell the salt breezes of the Bay of Naples in this Ku...
Sunshine
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3 posted 2008-03-10 03:38 PM


Depressions are dense water fathomless.

~*~

I like the depth of that line.




Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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4 posted 2008-03-10 07:06 PM


quote:
A yellow star with love and power shines.
Rays are all I need at this moment of
Cactus grown on the uterus of mind.
To the sun I rise from the sea of white.
Depressions are dense water fathomless.
From my hair the salt of grief dropping still.
Golden sand spreads a promised land to rest.
Nostril flows with light smell of fish and boats.
I remove the embrace of sea-algae.
The sand alone witness the love’s ascend
And, air brings the white cloth as my cover.

Welcome me. I am human again.



You bless me, dear Ku, with your inspired poem!
I welcome you back within the light.
Sometimes we experience this kind of momentaneous depression you describe here so intensely. It does happen and in the joy of "ascending" above darkness again there is immense reward for the soul.

I will keep this beauty, dear Ku, and cherish it.

Love,
Margherita

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