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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2008-03-09 11:43 PM


A good thing

You are very special
To your family and friends
You have a warm personality
A good thing that never ends

You’re becoming a fine man
On your way to accomplishing goals
Finishing school and living a life
One that’s not full of holes

Believe it or not
I look up to you
Hoping and dreaming
I can bring my life to anew

I hope we become better friends
So I can have someone to talk to
About problems or just life
Maybe that’s something that will come true!


© Copyright 2008 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
LadyTom
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1 posted 2008-03-09 11:48 PM


Very touching. beautiful!!!
passing shadows
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2 posted 2008-03-10 08:36 AM


nice one here

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-03-10 08:56 AM


Permeated with hope and trust.

Lovely.

Love.
Margherita

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-03-10 11:21 AM


"I hope we become better friends
So I can have someone to talk to
About problems or just life"

~ and that certainly would be "A good thing"!

I also believe that he is fortunate to have you in his corner ~ supporting and admiring him.

Touching piece of writing from your kind heart.


EA

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