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Many Fish In The Sea
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Many Fish In The Sea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Many Fish in the Sea  Damn! You pain me, push me into sad then into happy it's gotten bad we must stop wanting what we had. There is a fine line there like a ten pound for fishing catching a thirty-pounder and finding myself wishing that I could let you off the hook or that you'd snap it good... learn a lesson from the hook’s impression? I highly doubt you would. I would just throw in the pole, that would set both of us free... but then I would have no method for catching any of the many fish in the sea. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is wisdom and lessons in this fine poem..thank you.. goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
You may throw in the pole if you wish, but NOT the towel, One day you will pose for a photo opportunity with your 'prize' catch... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey girly, I am loving this one a lot. Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, Keep on fishing kid. There are some big ones down the mouth of Fish Creek. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Dixie! I appreciated ~ and totally understood! ~ the metaphor!  Linda |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
beautiful and smart poem. Quite philosophical. enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hugging you. |
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