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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-03-09 05:30 AM


From Hawaii With Love

Oh yes, for us I
had elaborate plans,
how we'd take the
Superferry to the
Big Island and enjoy
a romantic weekend.
While there we'd go
and watch the Kilauea
volcanic flow,
work on our tans,
walk on the beaches,
and share kisses
in the moonlights
romantic glow.
Alas, this time we
ran out of time.
Worry not my darling,
we'll take that trip
upon the next time.

JamesLee
09March
2008

At this time
the Superferry only
goes to Maui, so
next time my darling
visits, we might
fly to the Big Island.



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-03-09 05:43 AM


How wonderful to have such plans, dear James!

Aloha!

Beautiful, something to dream of while you are waiting.

Love.
Margherita

Alison
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2 posted 2008-03-09 05:50 AM


HEY JAMES!!!

I wanna go to -- Puhlease.  I'll make myself scarce once we get there.  Promise.

Wow, that sounds incredible.

A

passing shadows
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3 posted 2008-03-09 09:17 AM


beautiful!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-03-09 05:02 PM


Thank you Margherita, Alison and passing shadows for the wonderful responses...
Alison I want to go lots more than you, to enjoy some special times with my darling...perhaps in April...James

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-03-10 11:27 AM


Beautifully Written!

ARCTIC WIND

vandana
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6 posted 2008-03-10 12:00 PM


good read
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-03-10 04:17 PM


Thank you Artic Wind and vandana for the wonderful responses...James
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8 posted 2008-03-10 04:49 PM


Good work James, so Cherries out of season then??  John
simon
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9 posted 2008-03-10 04:58 PM


I'm appropriatly jealous...
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-03-10 05:29 PM


Thank you effjayel and simon for the wonderful responses...
Effjayel me and my honey had cherries the last time she was here, but they have disappeared from Safeway now for what seems like forever, but has probably been about a month...when we go to see the volcano flow we'll take along some papaya's and pineapple and perhaps some malasada's or cream puffs, they seem to be popular now...James

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