the wolf(crescendo of siver)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #42

the wolf(crescendo of siver)

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-03-09 01:09 AM

The wolf (crescendo of silver)
----------------------------
She knows by the flight of homing birds
Her hunger will grow to reach the nails.
The tingling nails will curl to seek preys.
She looks at the streak of trees doused in
The liquid crescendo of silver.
Moon barks out at the sad bluish earth!
She crawls towards the lake on the plain.
Hunger and hunger extending roots…
She hunts for her life.
But the bullet that
Enters in her head
Is for sick men’s’ game.
Silver quivers on the dirty lake.

clever talks delay friendship!

matronmedusa
Member

since 2008-03-08

Posts 89
Alabama, USA

1 posted 2008-03-09 01:25 AM

That's very moving. Good job with the imagery.

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

2 posted 2008-03-09 01:27 AM

My dear friend, Podda, I don't know how to say this. This poem is pure wonderful and is much more beyond that. One of my favorite of yours though they are all beautiful.
Thank you for sharing, poet!!!
And May you have a great weekend.!!

I simply want to recite it.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-03-09 05:19 AM

Oh, dear Ku, this was so intense that I felt my heart missing a beat. I really can't tell how much emotion this poem conveys. I wish it was distributed in schools etc.

Stunning poem!

Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2008-03-09 10:31 AM

oh Yeah!
You caught the animal instinct here very cleverly. Wonderful imagery. Intense and captivating write.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.