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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2008-03-08 01:11 PM


Each day my heart
grows fulgent, rising light
awaits me to love
again. God alone chooses
when that may be.
Once i loved so
much, with everything in
my soul. Soon the
day will come again
for my heart to
be filled like a
sweet scented forest, with
flowers growing in vivid
profusion, the delicateness of
love in perfection blowing
through like summer breezes
on cool moonlit midnights.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

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TinaTrivett
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1 posted 2008-03-08 01:15 PM


"God alone chooses
when that may be."

So true.

Beautiful poem...visuals were romantic. I'm sure you'll be writing lovely prose for your sweetheart soon.

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2008-03-08 01:39 PM


Tina..thank you for your kind words...love is our greatest gift, to love and be in total love as i have, is the greatest feeling in the world..God made us in HIS image...so just as he can love so can we..that is why love is so special so perfect so important..once you have had that love you want it again and you then never want it to be taken away..you want it to last the rest of your life...i want that more than anything again..but the purpose of our lives are decided by God..so where he leads me i will follow..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-03-08 01:52 PM


quote:
Soon the
day will come again
for my heart to
be filled like a
sweet scented forest, with
flowers growing in vivid
profusion


Beautifully expressed longing, dear Phil. Tend the garden of your heart always and the special one will perceive the scent of your beauty.
Love.
Margherita


Goldenrose
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4 posted 2008-03-08 02:01 PM


Margherita..If i tend my heart garden by praising and loving God then he will reward me with the love that i want more anything..but we must praise and honour his name and laws..

Thank you for your kind words..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

passing shadows
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5 posted 2008-03-09 11:21 AM


it's hard sometimes to get back on the horse once you've been thrown but you've got a great outlook here my friend


Goldenrose
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6 posted 2008-03-09 11:42 AM


Dixie...love is worth waiting for..if it means much to people as it means to me and always meant to me, then to be with the person you love the most is better than all the riches in the world..for me to have that feeling again is worth it and i would do anything to bring it back to me..love is special and should be the first, the second and the always..

God bless you for your kind words..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-03-09 12:37 PM


a most pleasant 'penning!'...

I am especially fond of the images of:

   a  "heart...filled like a
       sweet scented forest"

and:
       perfect love
       blowing through like
       a summer breeze!

applause!

Goldenrose
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8 posted 2008-03-09 12:41 PM


Bruce..thank you for your comments..you more than anyone know the heartache felt from love that is gone..so your words are a blessing and endorsement of my feelings..thank you..

God bless you and peace be with you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-03-10 11:25 AM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

Goldenrose
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10 posted 2008-03-10 11:33 AM


Arctic ..thank you for your kind comments..

peace be with you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

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11 posted 2008-03-10 11:53 AM


Phil~
I have loved all love while I was in it ...
and cherished it even if it went it's separate way~

It comes again when we are ready ... and not a moment too soon~

The Good Lord sends those who come into our lives ... we learn so that we are prepared for when the next one comes along~
She will .... she will~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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12 posted 2008-03-10 11:57 AM


nice
Goldenrose
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13 posted 2008-03-10 12:18 PM


Marge..if i surrender to Gods purpose for me there will be love for me again..i just have to let God guide me and find that love..i am ready..i am waiting...i love deeply and want that again and as you say it will happen..

Peace be with you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

Goldenrose
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14 posted 2008-03-10 12:19 PM


Vandana..short word.. big meaning...thank you for it..

God bless you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

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