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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-03-08 11:39 AM


So I met this girl at my school.
I was shy to talk to her for a few weeks.
First thing I asked was "you like this poem"?
She said it was cool.

Then I started to get to know her better.
Talking to her as she laughed.
We both exchanged memory's.
Then I wrote her a letter,

With a poem explaining how I liked her, her name is Sarah.
She loved it and smiled at me frequently.
We then talk for hours on the computer.
As I began a new chapter in my illusionary era.

I then asked her that one question,
that sealed the deal.
I then messaged her,
With my limited intuition

I asked her ''do you want to be my boyfriend''?
She then said yes,
I am now a part of her life and I am ecstatic.
Now I can call her more then my friend.

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LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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1 posted 2008-03-08 12:19 PM


The true sound of a loving heart. Soft, delicate and fragile. The perfect stage of life, worry free.
Beautiful.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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2 posted 2008-03-08 12:26 PM


Thank you.
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