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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 2008-03-08 10:35 AM



Late in autumn near day's end,
I walk alone on Kansas plain,
An unknown path on which to wend,
In gentle glow of Helios' wane.

Fading fast, an azure sky,
A soothing calm lays on the land,
Venus yet to ope'  her eye,
As feel the touch of unknown hand.

In cottonwood, a meadowlark,
Sounds forth her mournful cry,
Signaling out day's embark,
Beneath deep Kansas sky.

I walk alone, no trepidation,
Knowing not, my destination.

© Copyright 2008 Tim - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
1 posted 2008-03-08 11:00 AM


This is what a call poetry!  Love it!

Keeping this tucked away in my library.

miscellanea

LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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LA, CA
2 posted 2008-03-08 11:18 AM


Very good. Love the read.
poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india
3 posted 2008-03-08 11:24 AM


you brought out the power of words and paint the sky abit bluer.

clever talks delay friendship!

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-03-09 05:52 PM


Very nice...James
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