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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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On it's wings it came, slicing through clouds pewter, preceding the shaft that opened up behind it's tail, it's very own searchlight stretching just ahead of the gull as it wiffled wildly. The moment transporting me to a safe place, away from a mind distant, flung on the wind far like the gulls that animate my lonely skies marbled paper. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Wonderful write. My morning tea!!! Beautiful |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Ladytom..thank you for your kind words... May God bless you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Descriptive! ARCTIC WIND |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Arctic..thank you for your kind comments.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I love Seagulls and this poem. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
NICE! This is when you are at your best, if I may say so, Phil, when you immerse yourself in a nature write. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree. Ida |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Kacy..thank you for your kind words...i write just as i see it, i saw the gulls playing with the elements outside my window as i sat and watched, from where i was they looked so free even though the clouds were grey and dripped with sadness...thank you also for your email..i appreciate it so much when people still comunicate with me.. God bless you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Ida..thank you for your love of Gulls and your agreeance..it is what poets are here for..to bring alive your loving thoughts..on all subjects... God bless you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'slice of life' impressionistic naturalism; grand imagery! serious applause!! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Bruce..glad you enjoyed the imagery.. Thank you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
It's wonderful to see you back here again, Goldenrose, and this poem was a pleasure to read. |
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Talyn Junior Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 47North Carolina, USA |
Lovely description  Thank you for sharing. Talyn |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Goldenrose, This is most beautiful. It's a keeper, so I am keeping it in my library. Alison |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Art..it is good to be back...and is always a pleasure to write, post and be acknowledged by people...all we really need is to be recognised and converse with those people who are important to us..the people of PIP are among those important to me.. Peace be with you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Talyn..thank you for your words..kind words like yours are what i write for..a kind word can mean so much to me and to others on these boards..thats why kindness costs nothing.. Thank you.. Peace be with you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Alison..the fact that you want to keep my poem in your library means you hold my words dear..i hold all words from the people i love the most dear...even if those words are dried up..it means a lot to me that you should hold my words dear..thank you..for your kindness ... peace be with you.. and may God bless you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Linda..thank you very much for the gull picture...dont you think that gulls almost look lonely when flying alone? The way they fly in slow motion almost seems solemn? Perhaps it is just the way i was feeling when i saw them for the poem..dont listen to me.. May God bless you for your kindness.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, I do agree that a lone gull looks lonely. However, this one was with dozens of other gulls! lol I cropped and then enlarged it so that I could single this one out! I am an avid seagull watcher! I have a gorgeous porcelain one that I adore. I have written about seagulls and painted them as well. Your poem was lovely and I shall now take the opportunity to save it!  Love & Seagull Light, Linda  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Linda..thank you..may your soul fly and sour as if on seagulls wings.. God bless you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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