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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2008-03-07 09:09 PM


It could happen to anyone,
I know, it happened to me...
just me, I'm no one special.
It happens from time to time,
a freak of nature... a black cloud... a curse:
Yes  shhhh!
I had a thought!
It wasn't serious really,
just a nagging awareness,
an indefinable something:
but it wouldn't go away.
I tried television: sitcoms, sports, news,
especially the weather channel;
tried junk foods and lots of coffee;
even tried booze and marijuana...
still it persisted.
Finally, in desperation
I sought medical advice.
I found out there is a treatment for my condition,
a laserotomy of the loboteum or something...
What a relief!
I borrowed the money and had the thing
SURGICALLY REMOVED!
Now back to washing dishes and scrubbing floors
and half my pay going to the government;
the rest to insurance companies...
utilities, futilities -
no more anomalies!
Entertain another thought? Never!
Tell me what to think,
I don't want to think about it.

© Copyright 2008 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-03-07 09:56 PM


WindWalker,

Don't be too alarmed.  Many people have had thoughts, on rare occasions.  They tend to go away by themselves in time.  The main thing to remember is:

                          YOU ARE NOT ALONE

Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2008-03-07 10:11 PM


most 'entertaining thoughts,' Mr. W.W. and great reply, Bobby J.!

applause for this 'write!'

[you two never fail to 'liven up' my evening!]

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
3 posted 2008-03-08 06:05 AM


WW, been there, done that ! Good write...John
LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
Posts 353
LA, CA
4 posted 2008-03-08 11:33 AM


enjoyed. "fun" to read.
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2008-03-08 06:21 PM


I just had to return for another 'official' read of this 'penning!'...

Here in the U.S. of 'Amnesia' (land of forgotten promises and 'runaway' dreams)
rational thought/reason seem to be (sadly) ever-vanishing commodities...ergo,
the 'great experiment' in participatory, representative 'democracy' (of Jeffersonian
purity) is devolving into (at best) a corporate 'mediocracy' of conveniently 'dumbed
down' slaves...in 21st. century (electronic 'info. processing' and service industry)
versions of corporate sweatshops; etc.

continuing applause for this 'write!'

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2008-03-08 06:32 PM


This is funny but so true, reminds me of a poem I wrote once called "A Dangerous Thing"
                                     Ida

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