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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-03-07 06:33 PM


   Winter Reflections

after pure and gentle
  rain…

a clear moon above
the shifting clouds
and drifting world

mountain silhouettes
ripple in this moonlit
lake of fine memories

lonely thoughts and
fleeting dreams
rise on the wind
to meet the cosmic
‘deep-time’ void

    ---b. e. adams (3/7/2008)

© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-03-07 06:49 PM


"mountain silhouettes
ripple in this moonlit
lake of fine memories"

Beautiful imagery, Bruce.

LadyTom
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2 posted 2008-03-07 07:49 PM


You stood on the turning milky way
To watch Sun and its siblings
swirling beside you
The old world was drifting away
with its seasons, rains and lake
and all memories of the moon

YOU always stood there watching
and sigh.

Have a wonderful weekend, dear Bruce.
Always wonderful poem.

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3 posted 2008-03-07 11:25 PM


I too have a lake of fine memories

beautiful piece!

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-03-07 11:26 PM


Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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5 posted 2008-03-08 02:16 AM


A clear moon above
the shifting clouds
and drifting world.
These words make me think of the pictures I've seen of the earth from space.
                                     Ida

MJ
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6 posted 2008-03-08 02:43 AM


Lovely. Reminds me of times alone, when there is no thought of others, just the universe.
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7 posted 2008-03-08 04:38 AM


Bruce, another fine dip into the reservoir of your mind, much enjoyed, thanks  John
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