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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2008-03-07 08:20 AM


Her breasts now round and sumptuous
A figure that's adorned,
She's worked on this continuously,
Before was only scorned.

Hair like silver strands of silk,
A complexion like a baby,
Legs like that on Britney Spears,
One very gorgeous lady.

She's worked and saved and done without
To get her body in this shape,
Now she's pursued by all the guys,
Her looks are simply great.

Though it took so many years,
She's never been regretful
Congratulations Balladeer,
Your surgery was successful!

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2008-03-07 08:34 AM


youre still a little boy at heart...gigglebox!
jwesley
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2 posted 2008-03-07 09:26 AM


CUTE!!

j.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2008-03-07 09:30 AM


Oh you should see me when I chuckle!




Balladino
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4 posted 2008-03-07 09:51 AM


But little secret to public unknown
The surgeon left something undone
So the same old mind, old heart of man
And same old voice sings all the wrong songs

[This message has been edited by Balladino (03-07-2008 12:59 PM).]

Toerag
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Ala bam a
5 posted 2008-03-07 10:13 AM


Balladino?....surely you jest..
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-03-07 10:28 AM


What a disappointment!!! I was so excited when I saw the title because I thought it was a poem about me! ~ little pouty face here.

Oh well, what the hell, it was about my idol Balladeer. He looks great no matter what clothes ~ or skin ~ he's in!

~ Another cute write, from a cute little toe.


Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-07-2008 11:15 AM).]

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