mid-day thoughts, in medias res

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Open Poetry #42

mid-day thoughts, in medias res

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2008-03-06 07:30 PM

even then
you didn't answer me,
only looked away

as if the sun could not shine

only clouds were visible that day

when you looked at me sideways
as if to say

it's over

my backwards glance to you was

it never really began

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

1 posted 2008-03-06 08:01 PM

I was taken completely by surprise by this write. Your writes are always moving and powerful in a subtle and gentle way, but this one... this one... WOW.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-03-06 08:03 PM

Thanks, mon amie.
I'm just dredging past rivers with this one.

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

3 posted 2008-03-06 08:39 PM

This very unique one. Beautiful but unique from you. This is not love poem, no. I shall go archiving.

Love your poems. my dear lady.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-03-06 09:37 PM

Yo Midnitesun,

I like this one. You got that person good. This one made me laugh.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-03-07 02:35 AM

I can't help but like this one. I just like the idea of a women who is not cying and begging some worthless cad to come back. I've read that story too many times already.
Bravo!
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-03-08 01:37 PM

This one, dear Kacy, is a very good one to celebrate today!!
Your are a wonderful example of a true power woman with the right mix of a beautiful mind and a sensitive heart.
Love.
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2008-03-08 05:30 PM

I couldn't possibly improve on the fine and appropriate 'comment/reply'
posts already made pursuant to this author and her 'write'...
other than to add that it further demonstrates her grand range with
'word-paint' and her lovely independent spirit as a very special human being!

serious applause!

matronmedusa
Member

since 2008-03-08

Posts 89
Alabama, USA

8 posted 2008-03-10 02:12 PM

I absolutely loved the way you gave an example on how a message can be conveyed without saying a single word.

Bravo!

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