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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2008-03-06 01:19 PM

Rain

Yesterday brought rain.
Today it still comes
and barefoot , umbrella above,
i walk the sidewalk, going down the street,
maybe up – don’t know.
Don’t care – much,
for anything, but
the water between my toes,
beneath my feet - and so it goes,
up the street, or maybe down –
nobody cares.
Rain –
great falling sheets
splashing my legs, soaking my jeans,
but I don’t care – much,
for anything, but
not going home to that empty place,
that house we shared.
Now don’t.
Yesterday, today – tomorrow –
barefoot, umbrella above,
walking the sidewalk, up,
maybe down – who cares –
long as it away
from that empty place, that house
we shared.
Now don’t, anymore.
Rain,
under cloudless skies,
and sun.

© wesley james beard, jr.
march 2008

(not about me)

[This message has been edited by jwesley (03-06-2008 02:04 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-03-06 01:58 PM

JWesley~
This 'rain' crys~

*Hugs* and *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-03-06 02:02 PM

This hurts yes! Very touching words, dear Wesley.

Love.
Margherita

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

3 posted 2008-03-06 02:04 PM

JW, I hope the long range forecast is good and the sun shines for you again soon... John

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

4 posted 2008-03-06 02:06 PM

touching. beautifully sad. We allowed ourself to be sad sometimes.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-03-06 02:51 PM

Very sad but excellent writing.
Ida

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2008-03-08 10:30 AM

When I see your name, I always know I'm in for a read that will encompass my thoughts. Your poetry is so real. I'm glad to know it is not about you. This is very touching.

miscellanea

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-03-08 11:53 AM

Very touching indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2008-03-08 02:01 PM

I'm so glad it's not about you. A most touching and emotive write and one I can relate to although not quite for the same reason. I know about "avoidance" though.

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