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passing shadows
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0 posted 2008-03-06 08:19 AM



Mutual Empathy


I held you
in my eyes
fumbling
for something
to tell you
about life
and why
you are dying

and you
did the same
for me.



© Copyright 2008 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-03-06 09:17 AM


Passing shadows,

What a good idea.  Thoughts on reality should be shared.

Bobby

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2008-03-06 12:47 PM


Very good, my friend...surprised this hasn't seen more hits so we're gonna move it back into view....

loved it


jimmy

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
3 posted 2008-03-06 01:39 PM


Dixie, this speaks volumes to me, but you know, actions speak louder than words...Just a thought I like it muchly

John

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-03-06 02:42 PM


Nice...James
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