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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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I'm dying slowly. That's all that needs to be said to make poetry. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Emotion's are filled up in this Write! Are you in need of some serious CHOCOLATE!?! I may ask ARCTIC WIND |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Very Good Dixie, With your permission, would like to include this in my Word file collection of poems by others. Also to highlight a topic of discussion. John . |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you are not dying your living is just on pause hang in there Dixie  believe in yourself good things are coming your way try to be patient I have faith in you you are much stronger than this you will rise above |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Really SEA . . . Beyond a point the bag lady and the billionaire are on a road neither can avoid traveling . . . . |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I have no idea what you mean ?? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The rougher edges are the beginning of a polished gem. nicely done. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. "I'm dying slowly." . |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Death is part of life. Breath beginning, breath ending linked by each heart beat. A |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, Cute little Senryu poem. It gave me a giggle--is it supposed to? Everyone is dying slowly. We should keep that in mind. Bobby |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I agree with what Sea wrote , whatever is happening Dixie you write fantastic poetry Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Michael, thank you and yes I do need some chocolate and soon!  John, I'd be proud to be included. Thank you very much. Susan my friend, I love those very inspiring senryus! Keepers! Kathleen, thank you, you always come up with the right quote for me! Alison, a wonderful little piece! I love it! Bobby, well it wasn't really supposed to be cute but I guess some interpret poetry differently because of their own lives and that's a good thing. Thank you for reading! Hope, thank you my friend. I agree too |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this! Gave me a sorely-needed laugh this moring. Lifted the get-outta-bed cobwebs. Truth and levity, together...wonderful my friend.... jimmy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dixie~ You know me ... always looking for a positive~  When I substituted 'living' instead of 'dying' into your piece, I found my positive~ Thanks for the inspire~ Living ever slowly Magnifies this life~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
Mind over matter! I'm a firm believer in positive thoughts! I believe that positive thoughts and a positive outlook on life will change everything for the better!! Hang in there youre doing a fantasitic job!!! |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Hmmm... We were all dying From the moment we were born Life's the inbetween... Loved this... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
:O -Juju |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. We are all dying slowly Most simply disappear without trace And then there are those Like Passing Shadows Who shall be indelibly etched in this place.. . |
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