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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2008-03-05 04:38 PM


The Trigger

As I walk on this sand
The hot, burning soft feel
It seems as if I am in another land
One that seems so unreal

I cannot explain this bliss
Having the feeling of worry free
I could never imagine missing this
It is more beauty than the eye can see

Now I am ascending
Up into the skies above
I do not have to keep pretending
About this fake moment of love

Why you lied to me
I cannot quite figure
I've changed my mind, honey
For you, I will not pull the trigger


[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (03-06-2008 07:12 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-03-05 04:45 PM


damn right you won't!

living well is the best revenge. I don't know who said that, or I'd quote him/her. But it's soooo true.

jwesley
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2 posted 2008-03-05 06:38 PM


No one's worth the trigger, my friend...just let the sun go down on them and put them behind - there's always someone else in the wings...

jimmy

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