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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2008-03-05 01:54 PM


Difference

Do you remember what I told you?
I'm only lonely when I'm in loveā€¦

When I felt the whiskers on you face
How they brushed slowly across my skin

In your arms I forgot to kiss you
Without any word you walked away

You would think that I had learned by now
I guess in the end I never changed


-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (03-05-2008 02:44 PM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2008-03-05 01:56 PM


Juju, this is absolutely beautiful.  There is such a growth in your poetry since you first came here, and how lovely it is to watch your words grow.  You fly high with this one gal.  
LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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LA, CA
2 posted 2008-03-05 01:59 PM


beautiful indeed. A quite voice.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-03-05 02:03 PM


Absolutely love it...James
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2008-03-06 10:04 AM


Thankyou for your responses (:

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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