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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

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0 posted 2008-03-05 06:16 AM

What is the meaning of emotion?
All it does is cause my fragile heart pain.
It's a sickness that can only be cured by death.
I'm crying but I can't tear.
My soul is has battle scars, But it has never fought a war.

Why is this happening to me?
What have I done to deserve this?
As I ask these questions my heart turns to stone.
Tears stop flowing and anger starts going.
Despair turns into hatred, Wallowing turns into Fury.

With a rage filled soul I write these words.
No man or woman shall hurt me with their words.
Nobody shall make me cry again.
Before it happens I will do what I must.
Even if it means I lose everyones trust.

nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2008-03-05 07:11 AM

xTr3m3sT, first of all emotion isn't a sickness...it is what makes us human to be able to feel and sort out what is good or bad for us and is a release if expressed properly.

We can't control those whose actions or words hurt us on purpose or by accident, but we can hopefully control our reactions to the situation.

Nice writing
M

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

2 posted 2008-03-05 07:13 AM

Thank you. I was very depressed when I wrote this one and let it all out.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-03-05 12:26 PM

You are starting to like here I can tell!

ARCTIC WIND (Nice write lol)

LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29

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4 posted 2008-03-05 12:59 PM

Sad!!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

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5 posted 2008-03-05 01:51 PM

Sometimes, the mere act of writing it out helps to ease the pain. I felt that in your words. Nicely done.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

6 posted 2008-03-05 03:24 PM

Yeah this poem helped me release a lot of my sadness

dollmaker
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since 2006-08-30

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mass dorchester

7 posted 2008-03-06 02:23 PM

I HAVE HAD DEPRESSION BEFORE, SO DEEPLY

I FEEL YOUR PAIN.

CAN I GIVE U SOME ADVICE...

GET HELP IF FEELINGS GO ON AND ON...

NOT TRYING 2 TELL U WHAT 2 DO BUT I KNOW

DEPRESSION HURTS.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

8 posted 2008-03-06 02:27 PM

Thank you for your advice

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