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love song in easy c
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love song in easy c |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were arrows drifting winds the tall trees with dawns behind but it was your eyes and the coffee smells and another day with slow oil shimmering it's beginning and you laughed sometimes like you were comfortable with being uncomfortable and the attention was velvet that felt slippery under your skin but you dressed anyway in nothing special kinds of easy just in case there was time sometime to unwrap ourselves slowly and discover some secret need to when want to was our love song _______________ Daark |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Nice poem! I liked this one and enjoyed reading it a lot  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
to remember precious moments as such, is a blessing of life... Hi D...as always, fantastic write |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"in nothing special kinds of easy just in case there was time sometime to unwrap ourselves slowly and discover some secret need" nicely thought~~ M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and you laughed sometimes like you were comfortable with being uncomfortable A state when healing occurs ... Your love song in easy c is very captivating. love Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you cause the most beautiful sighs.  |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
I love the gentle flow of this-very nice sir |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
enjoyed this very much |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
bodies still damp with the dew of love sloe eyed breathing exchaned lingeringly the musky scent of what was shared fills the air as lazily, lovers drift to become 2 again.... those thoughts inspired by your wonderful poem, Daark... enjoyed muchly "Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in nothing special kinds of easy just in case there was time sometime to unwrap ourselves slowly and discover some secret need to when want to was our love song You sip comfortable well  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always A pleasure to read.. ARCTIC WIND |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
ah, dark sings pink now. Beautiful!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sometimes, wanting to is even more beautiful than being able to. Lovely this is dear man. oh geez....just realized I already replied to this early this morning. Thats what I get for reading before I have my coffee... the second read was just as lovely as the first tho' if'n I say so myself. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles... love songs and beng comfortable with you Mr Daark would be kinda nice! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
xt, thank you so much ______________ Ms leej, thanks babe for the touch ______________ ms MMs thank you lady friend _________________ ms mar, thanks babe for the eyes ___________________ ms gs, thanks my friend for your smile __________________ ms firestorm, thank you for the red ink fire ________________ ms suesea, thank you babe for coming by ____________________ friend moon, thank you for your smile here _________________ ms sun, you always bless me when you visit, thank you ____________________ a & w friend thank you so much _____________________ ms ladytom, thank you for the read and touch _______________ ms gs, I owe you double then..thanks hon _________________ ms r & b, thank you for looking up from down under |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes words are not adequate to express how a poem feels. Sometimes it like a soft touch to the mind. A |
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