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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-03-05 05:16 AM


Nine One One


A conversation between a man and a woman...


"You know that I could
have you arrested."

"For what?"

"For torture; you know that I'm sensually
attracted to you, that I want to touch you,
smell you, kiss your soft lips, and all
you want to do is tell me no.  
In my book that's torture."

"Go ahead and call nine one one
and we'll see who's side they take."

Nine one one...


JamesLee
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2008



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2008-03-05 07:04 AM


LOL....very nice
xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-03-05 07:06 AM


LOL. good poem. I had to reread it in order to get the poem
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2008-03-05 07:12 AM


  made me smile on this rainy  morning.

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Margherita
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4 posted 2008-03-05 07:52 AM


One of the two seems totally un-responsive ...

Reminds me of some tv shows where they present such cases.

Nice rendering, dear James!

Love.
Margherita

simon
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5 posted 2008-03-05 07:54 AM


Enjoyed very much...
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6 posted 2008-03-05 08:51 AM


This is GREAT-put a smile on my face
passing shadows
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7 posted 2008-03-05 09:07 AM


yeah I know what she's feeling

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8 posted 2008-03-05 10:18 AM




ARCTIC WIND

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-03-05 11:06 AM


James,

This is a funny little episode.

Somehow, I feel that police intervention is not required.

Nice writing James.

Bobby

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10 posted 2008-03-05 11:13 AM


Is she nuts?!?

Cute write!


Linda

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11 posted 2008-03-05 03:09 PM


Hawaii 5-0h Boy !!
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12 posted 2008-03-05 08:22 PM


Interesting. interesting. Have some truth in it. Demanding payment from innocent!!!
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13 posted 2008-03-06 12:27 PM


You are making me grin now, James.  
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2008-03-06 04:12 AM


Thank you LeeJ, xTr3m3sT, nakdthoughts, Margherta, simon, firestorm, passing shadows, Artic Wind, Robert, Earth Angel, effjayel, Lady Tom and Alison for the wonderful responses...What word would best describe the man in the conversation, bold, facetious, or a fool...or perhaps you have your own words...James
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