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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2008-03-04 06:51 PM



The Worst Hurt

There is someone out there
That hurt me extremely bad
Someone that is so hateful
Could it have been my dad?

There are times he doesn’t hurt
But times he is too strong
Maybe I should tell someone?
I do know right from wrong

I still do share love for him
Because he is my father
I just hope that one day
This will not go any farther

The pain he gives me everyday
Does not originate physically
Rather, it comes from the inside
Something we call mentally

One day this will all go away
And he will realize what he has done
To hurt me in the worst way
I hope he doesn’t call it fun


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1 posted 2008-03-04 06:53 PM


I like this one, we both have a similar style

I wish I can post more then 3 poems a day...I would have posted much more of my work lol

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2 posted 2008-03-04 06:53 PM




if it's bad, talk to someone...


LadyTom
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3 posted 2008-03-04 07:09 PM


I hope that this is merely a poem but not your real life.
very sad, truly.  

ILoveTheRain
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4 posted 2008-03-04 10:23 PM


It used to be this way before my mom and dad divorced...and then he remarried and changed. I was only writing memories from the past...ones that are still within my head.


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