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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2008-03-04 05:51 PM



Foreign Relationship

No one understands
Why I am together with you
They think our relationship is bland
But to me, I know it is true

I know that you are foreign
But just know I really don’t care
They think it would be boring
But to part with you, I wouldn’t dare

It is sometimes hard to talk to you
But I know that you will learn
Our hopes and goals may come true
And that would be a great thing to earn

So don’t worry about all of them
We will always make it through
Together, we have our own life to tend
And together, we will always be true



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with you
1 posted 2008-03-04 05:54 PM


here's hoping you are learning too...

very sweet poem!

ILoveTheRain
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2 posted 2008-03-04 05:57 PM


Thank you, I almost had trouble with it and it is still in need of revising, but I posted it for all of those people out there that think others have to approve of your relationship. They don't. Follow your heart. It will be much better in the end.
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3 posted 2008-03-05 10:12 AM


Very sweet Write!



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4 posted 2008-03-05 11:01 AM


Always be true to yourself. Live, love, laugh ~ and learn!


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