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LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

0 posted 2008-03-04 04:14 PM

Shall not force me
In the season of
Soft early spring
The warm smile of the colors
Have quietly dreamed through
Whole winter clouds
To give you a poem

Just don’t force me
The melted stream is not my thought
Of that rose mirrored out
The same swirl of reflection
Of light
To wave you a shined whisper

Just don’t force me
A word in such tenderness
Would be torn into million pieces
In the cold steel hand
from a Pentium heart
In my memory

But you forced me
you did

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-03-04 04:21 PM

"In the season of
Soft early spring
The warm smile of the colors
Have quietly dreamed through
Whole winter clouds
To give you a poem"

beauty here...

really enjoyed your first post!

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-03-04 04:27 PM

Waving you a shined whisper right back.....
this is pretty....

Charlie

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-03-04 04:31 PM

Lady, it is nice to
welcome you again,
so please check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

4 posted 2008-03-04 04:35 PM

To Sea
Thank you Sea, you always write beautiful poems.

To John, Thank you. You always left me worried. Aunt T

To Sunshine
Dear Lady, I want to write like you. This poem, was indeed started from "if I can write like Lady Sunshine, a soft tuned poem."

Thank you all.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2008-03-04 05:56 PM

My dear Lady T,your opening stanza was a beautiful 'birthing' to your poem!

"Shall not force me
In the season of
Soft early spring
The warm smile of the colors
Have quietly dreamed through
Whole winter clouds
To give you a poem"

In all fairness to your poem, I adored each stanza! I do so enjoy reading poems about poems!~ and poets! This one was uniquely special ~ and a

Love & Poet Light,

EA

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-03-04 06:09 PM

LadyTom,

Thanks so much for the shined whisper. It’s always a great pleasure to read your poems. Felix likes them too.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-03-04 06:12 PM

Enjoyed...James

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

8 posted 2008-03-04 06:27 PM

Excellent poem, No more then excellent, Extraordinary.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2008-03-04 07:36 PM

Lady,

Thank you so much for the beautiful compliment. What you must know, is that there are several wonderful poets at PiP that I am learning from...along with a lot of reading of poets from the past, and our contemporaries outside of PiP. Keep reading, keep writing...

but yes, dear...you did make me Shine...

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