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0 posted 2008-03-04 04:05 PM






Anticipation
the clouds tease, in slow motion
perhaps tonight, rain


~*~

I beg of the sky
stay warm…please no more snowing
gift me instead, rain


~*~


I wait patiently
pretending I have patience
and the clouds still tease…


~*~

A prayer is offered
in repetitive chanting
please rain…please…please rain


~SEA~



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1 posted 2008-03-04 04:10 PM


Careful what you wish for, dear...
lately, the weather's been responding...
in spades!

LadyTom
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2 posted 2008-03-04 04:15 PM


Beautiful photo and lovely poems. enjoyed and wish for the rain too.
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I wish for lots and lots of rain!!!
Hey I'm on a hill

LT thank you!

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4 posted 2008-03-04 04:30 PM


SEA, you have had more than your fair share of rain,  I remember when you were a mere puddle....
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5 posted 2008-03-04 04:32 PM


LOL

nope, i always want more...

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6 posted 2008-03-04 04:58 PM


Loved it SEA...always like you writes about rain...(me, I love the rain).

j.

simon
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7 posted 2008-03-04 05:41 PM


Loved the poems but you wish for rain?
Really?

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8 posted 2008-03-04 05:43 PM


jwesley!! yep rain...good thank you..

simon, yes really really I don't think I will ever wish for snow again...lol

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9 posted 2008-03-04 05:51 PM


What i try with a downpour
You say in drop
upon drop
till we sweetly
drown
in your perfect
rain

Come on rain!!!

Hugs, Robert

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thank you Rob!!
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11 posted 2008-03-04 06:16 PM


SEA,

This is a rather nice presentation for your rain poem.

Bobby

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12 posted 2008-03-04 06:19 PM


I agree...give Sea some rain...some precious wet rain...James
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13 posted 2008-03-04 06:22 PM


High Cee! ~ Ooops! It's my musical background! I meant, "Hi, SEA"!!!

It's a good thing that you live on a hill! After your invigorating rain dance of 'pleaful' words, the rains will undoubtedly be coming! ~ and coming!

Beautifully scribed, Susan!

Linda



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14 posted 2008-03-04 06:48 PM


This poem was awesome!! You are always wishin' for that rain...lets hope for some sun just kiddin' this was great I loved it
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15 posted 2008-03-04 07:58 PM


I second what Sunshine said. We got lots of rain last night, as well as some unwanted stuff. A lot of times, we get more than just rain here in Oklahoma.
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16 posted 2008-03-04 08:43 PM


lovely-fine imaging (photo. and poetic)!

applause!!

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17 posted 2008-03-05 05:53 AM


Welp come on over gal, we have plenty of it, flash flooding and all that good stuff.  Enjoyed.
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18 posted 2008-03-05 07:03 AM


Boy, did we ever have a storm of rain, high winds and wind damage last night....yes, I know how snow and lots of it can get one down...but, do be careful what you wish for love....hugs Lee J.  
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19 posted 2008-03-05 08:05 AM


It seems to rain everywhere, except where you live. This is very beautiful, it shows a deep longing.

Love.
Margherita

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beautiful! I love it!

wish I could send you some of mine

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21 posted 2008-03-05 10:17 AM


Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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22 posted 2008-03-05 09:53 PM



Oh Sea you are not the only one wanting rain

We are having a ten year drought here in Victoria and things are very grim, but I

enjoyed your writing and I hope it rains for us all.

Lindsay

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23 posted 2008-03-05 11:40 PM


SEA

I love the rain that bounces off the ground.  That hard, pounding rain that makes me want to run out and get totally soaked, play in puddles, splash and jump ... and drive my car through them full tilt.

I want rain too now.

A

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24 posted 2008-03-06 09:23 AM


oh this has made me miss houston soooo much!!! It rains, no wait, it POURS there!! days and days of rain and running through massive puddles! Now we are stuck running through frost bite :-(
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SEA~

Your wish for rain is understood
by one who does the rain dance~

I wish you rain ... to fill the SEA
and just a little left over for me~

*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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26 posted 2008-03-06 11:24 AM


good read
sewasham
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27 posted 2008-03-13 10:34 PM


Very nice. Your words flow as gently as the rain. Enjoyed. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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28 posted 2008-03-13 11:37 PM


You wouldn't want to live on a hill in California when it rains. The houses tend to slide down the hills. Mostly expensive homes so I don't have to worry but I hope you get you rain and I do love rain too.
                                    Ida

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