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Open Poetry #42

The Sun's Greatness.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

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0 posted 2008-03-04 02:46 PM

The sun's bright white rays.
Shine behind that tall oak tree.
Glowing those great leaves.

The sun's bright white rays
Hide behind those milk white clouds.
Painting the sky gold.

The sun's bright white rays.
Showing natures glory.
Set at the moment of dusk.

[This message has been edited by xTr3m3sT (03-04-2008 07:29 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-03-04 06:16 PM

A pleasure to read...James

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

2 posted 2008-03-04 06:25 PM

Thanks

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2008-03-04 06:50 PM

The sun's bright white rays.
Showing natures glory.
Set at the moment of dusk.

Consider it

John

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

4 posted 2008-03-04 06:54 PM

Thanks, Yeah maybe I should reword it like that, How do I edit my post?

LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29

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LA, CA

5 posted 2008-03-04 07:12 PM

very good.

see the little white icon with a pen? click that to edit within 24 hours.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

6 posted 2008-03-04 07:29 PM

Thank you.

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