Mom and Felix Stroll The Hood

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-03-04 12:22 PM

It’s a hot and sultry
summer night.

Mom and Felix are out
walking the crowded hood.

It seems everyone
is out on the street tonight.

Mom has Felix
walking a little ahead of her.

She likes to watch
the way he moves.

Felix doesn’t mind.
He likes to make her happy.

Bobby

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

1 posted 2008-03-04 12:33 PM

The heavenly blessed relationship and bond. the Unconditioned love.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-03-04 12:37 PM

LadyTom,

Thank you very much for the kind words on this poem.

You nailed the meaning completely.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-03-04 12:42 PM

I love the tone of this write and the feelings ~ and memories of walks with my daughters ~ that it evokes in me.

That was a lovely Mom and son moment.

Linda

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-03-04 01:06 PM

I think I understand this poem beyond it's words.
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-03-04 01:32 PM

Linda,

I'm pleased this brought back happy memories for you.

Yes, it was a nice moment. Mom and Felix were always very close.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-03-04 01:33 PM

Ida,

I'm sure you do dear.

It was all right though, it really was.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-03-04 11:04 PM

Very nice...James

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2008-03-04 11:09 PM

James,

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm very pleased you enjoyed the read. Your approval means a great deal to me.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-03-06 06:23 PM

ah see, Bobby, you have me smiling again... Felix and his Mom have a special bond... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

10 posted 2008-03-06 07:38 PM

Dear RDB,

Yes they do. Felix and I are glad to see you smile.

Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

11 posted 2008-03-08 05:35 PM

you typically display such a fine natural/'conversational'
(slice-of-real-life) impressionistic style in these 'writes!'

serious applause!!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

12 posted 2008-03-08 05:42 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

Thanks for the very kind words.

There you go, now you've got me blushing again.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

13 posted 2010-11-16 08:37 PM

Felix had a splendid Mom. I like Felix poems.

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