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Mom and Felix Stroll The Hood

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Robert E. Jordan
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Itís a hot and sultry
summer night.  

Mom and Felix are out
walking the crowded hood.  

It seems everyone
is out on the street tonight.  

Mom has Felix
walking a little ahead of her.  

She likes to watch
the way he moves.  

Felix doesnít mind.  
He likes to make her happy.

Bobby
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LadyTom
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1 posted 03-04-2008 12:33 PM       View Profile for LadyTom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LadyTom

The heavenly blessed relationship and bond. the Unconditioned love.  
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 03-04-2008 12:37 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

LadyTom,

Thank you very much for the kind words on this poem.

You nailed the meaning completely.

Bobby
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I love the tone of this write and the feelings ~ and memories of walks with my daughters ~ that it evokes in me.

That was a lovely Mom and son moment.


Linda
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4 posted 03-04-2008 01:06 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

I think I understand this poem beyond it's words.
                                Ida
                          
Robert E. Jordan
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Linda,

I'm pleased this brought back happy memories for you.

Yes, it was a nice moment.  Mom and Felix were always very close.

Bobby
Robert E. Jordan
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Ida,

I'm sure you do dear.

It was all right though, it really was.

Bobby
JamesMichael
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Very nice...James
Robert E. Jordan
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James,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  I'm very pleased you enjoyed the read.  Your approval means a great deal to me.

Bobby
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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ah see, Bobby, you have me smiling again... Felix and his Mom have a special bond... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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Dear RDB,

Yes they do.  Felix and I are glad to see you smile.

Bobby
secondhanddreampoet
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you typically display such a fine natural/'conversational'
(slice-of-real-life) impressionistic style in these 'writes!'

serious applause!!
Robert E. Jordan
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Secondhanddreampoet,

Thanks for the very kind words.

There you go, now you've got me blushing again.

Bobby
Earl Brinkman
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13 posted 11-16-2010 08:37 PM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

Felix had a splendid Mom.  I like Felix poems.
 
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