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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2008-03-04 12:51 PM

It’s an artful land that dissipates
the force of love and me
held both as quite amazing
by viewpoints of the truth.

Think and say and know it;
well, glory, glory, be
how easy to attain greatness
if this is all it takes
but perhaps the recipe
is missing an ingredient
and all attempts flop dismally
simply because of heat.

Too hot, too cold, rise and dip
the temperature of need
and it’s like the changing guard
brings the unwanted new
and we sigh and cry repeatedly
like silly little maidens
left standing at the fort.

And then I breathe, oh, yes indeed,
because somewhere in the air
float particles of energy
like the love I feel for you
waiting for acceptance
by those in lack and need.

Back again to glory, glory, be
for I am here, you are there,
and I can’t alone produce
the really quite amazing
when love is just the heat in me
and not like you can see it.

So the maidens breathe and feel
and stand for a million years
at the fort of need!

Helen / 4 March 2008

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-03-04 07:40 AM

Helen~

This piece is layered with ponderous thoughts~

'And then I breathe, oh, yes indeed,
because somewhere in the air
float particles of energy
like the love I feel for you
waiting for acceptance
by those in lack and need.'

I LIKE this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2008-03-04 09:17 AM

Helen, you amaze me...brilliant discovery aren't they...some good, some not so good, but both very necessary....

Hugs to you and this stunning write

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2008-03-04 02:31 PM

Marge and LeeJ - thank you so much for your kind comments.

Marge - I've been missing the flowers in my inbox!

LeeJ - Hope all is well with you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2008-03-04 02:54 PM

quote:
Back again to glory, glory, be
for I am here, you are there,
and I can’t alone produce
the really quite amazing
when love is just the heat in me
and not like you can see it.

Oh, Helen...

well done!

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

5 posted 2008-03-04 02:59 PM

beautiful. enjoyed. life's truth.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2008-03-04 03:05 PM

Thanks Sunshine and Lady Tom! I had some words of wisdom (?) ready to type but I can only let out a sigh. I guess it's that "alone" thing that gets to one every now and again but life goes on ... and on and on!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-03-04 07:16 PM

Maiden Honey, may all you breathe and feel be glorious and meet your needs emotionally, physically, financially, and spiritually.

Giving you a big, loving hug,

Linda

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