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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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0 posted 2008-03-03 09:39 PM


Secret Thoughts

Thoughts are words unspoken
For the mind to feel on top of a cloud
In the sky, world wide open
For them to whisper, not aloud

Thoughts are our way of thinking
About our lives, friends, or the way we feel
Go deep, down inside your mind
But be careful not to spill

Thoughts are the little things
Like the way we all breathe
All our lives, we do it every moment
And it never seems to cease

Thoughts are our way of life
We have to have them to live
They are as beautiful as you are dear
And that is all I have to give


I hope you all understand the point I've given. This poem makes you think. And it is my favorite of mine yet!



[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (03-03-2008 10:51 PM).]

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LadyTom
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1 posted 2008-03-03 10:47 PM


beautiful romance. enjoyed.
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