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vandana
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0 posted 2008-03-03 11:56 AM



Does your heart beats?
for the first time,
You can feel heart beating,
you can feel love now,
Someone 's close to your heart,
Does it ache alot
When someone is loving you
Does it feel a love
Coming to your heart
Does your heart sings?
Does your heart rings?
This heart is carzy for you
It feels deeply for you
Come closer to me,
Feel the heartbeat,
Feel it ache,
Giving it away
Every moment of this love,
Does your heart ache a lot?
When someone is loving you,
Does it?

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-03-03 11:59 AM


One thing that is for sure, dear vandana, you have a heart that just bursts with love and would be certain to get any man's heart beating faster!

Loving hug,
Linda

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2008-03-03 12:16 PM


Could feel the emotion you graciously share with us.  
LadyTom
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3 posted 2008-03-03 01:42 PM


what a true love song!!!  Love is always seasoned with chocolitical  pain.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-03-03 03:00 PM


The heart brings a smile to my face when it is happy...James
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5 posted 2008-03-03 05:24 PM


Beautifully Penned

ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-03-05 03:55 AM


In answer to your question Vandana, it does indeed with a sweet kind of ache.
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7 posted 2008-03-05 07:31 PM


"This heart is carzy for you
It feels deeply for you
Come closer to me,
Feel the heartbeat,
Feel it ache"

beautiful, romantic and so *sigh* worthy

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