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baohan
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since 2008-03-01
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Hochiminh City, Vietnam

0 posted 2008-03-03 11:10 AM



Originally, this was called Funny, but I don't think that it fits this anymore.

OH THE HIGHER SOCIETY!

The door flung open as she comes in
Her figure was tough, tall and thin
Vintage dresses covered her pale skin
And that’s because her surname is McFlynn…

Showing no respect, she’s being loud
Making her way, straight to the crowd
Sweat from her skin, splits from her mouth
She’ll get what she endowed…

For all the beautiful people
She’s a bit of a pimple
But they wanted to keep it simple
So it’s better to not jump in someone’s tongue…

The next time she arrived
There was a big fuss
They must have two feeling:
She’s appealing or is just disgusts
And that’s what funny about the higher society…*sign*

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LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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LA, CA
1 posted 2008-03-03 01:30 PM


yap. Judgmental, Judgmental, Judgmental based vanity.
Good poem!!!

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2 posted 2008-03-03 05:18 PM


WELCOME TO PIP!

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3 posted 2008-03-05 03:51 AM


Although we are countries apart, I have seen this person in my lifetime Well done, and welcome to Passions In Poetry too.
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