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Open Poetry #42

Of Love Immortal...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2008-03-02 11:36 PM

I knew not the way of gods
who rule night's welkin realm,
To contemplate of their existence
left me with overwhelm,
For I am but a mortal being
To dust I shall return,
Thoughts beyond my earthen home
I found that I should spurn,
That is until I first met you,
When took your hand in mine,
Then sailed unto night's firmament,
On winds of vespertine.
We danced to music of the muse,
And sang with Sister's Seven,
We spend the night in Luna's glow,
Just this side of heaven.
When our lips in passion pressed,
We sailed through welkin's portal,
And crossed in the realm of gods,
Ensconced in love immortal.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-03-03 05:08 AM

Enjoyed...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2008-03-03 12:10 PM

Lyrical and lovely write!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-03-03 03:43 PM

Spring is seeking your pen again...
and the well of ink is running deep.

Thank you...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-03-03 05:25 PM

Very Lovely Write!

ARCTIC WIND

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2008-03-05 03:56 AM

I tell you Tim, every time I read these wonderful poems of yours to that lucky lady of yours, it almost makes me want to get married again - key word - almost

firestorm
Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 109

6 posted 2008-03-05 08:25 AM

Very lucky lady, indeed. Beautiful

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