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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2008-03-02 10:47 AM

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At the shore of your vastness

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Still out of breath I halt
at the shore of your vastness,
after riding the white mare
along the paths of desire,
through virgin forests
damp with innocence
and wildflowers’ scent.

With the smoothness of eons
sand grains caress my feet,
ceaseless waves nudge me
as if playing hide and seek.
Upon my lashes drops of dew
reverberate a lilac horizon,
my sigh of uninhibited awe
ripples the quiet of your gaze.

Here I am with heart and soul
a tiny offspring of the Whole,
I stretch towards you my rising sun,
to be wrapped in your arms of light.
I know you would seek me out
even if I was part of a crowd …
for this immense eternal Love
shines upon every single soul,
dipping it into unique colours,
equally dear to the Source of All.

At the shore of your vastness,
being just me as well as all together,
inundated by infinity
I share in the breath of Universe.

*

passing shadows
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1 posted 2008-03-02 10:54 AM

wow! this writing leaves me breathless!

incredible!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-03-02 11:54 AM

Maga Margherita, I behold the expansive and collective beauty of the All of your write, with awe.

"At the shore of your vastness,
being just me as well as all together,
inundated by infinity
I share in the breath of Universe."

Amen

Angelo Terrestre

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2008-03-02 12:01 PM

Dear Margherita, I'm so glad I'm here long enough to enjoy this wonderful penning of yours. I just know I'll search it out again when technology allows. Truly lovely pic and words!

Love
Helen

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-03-02 12:01 PM

I truly wish there was a way to go back into a reply post to Save a poem, if you neglected to do so in the first place. It would be less embarrassing for absent-minded readers like I. Sheesh!

SAVED

effjayel
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5 posted 2008-03-02 12:43 PM

Mama Mia.....if Michael Angelo had used a pen instead of a paintbrush, this is how the ceiling in the sistine chapel would look

ciò è bella....

John

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-03-02 12:54 PM

Margherita,

You've done a bang-up job with this very pretty poem.

I like it loads.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-03-02 02:11 PM

I agree with John, Margharita. You painted the sitine chapel of my mind with this one.
Ida

Alison

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8 posted 2008-03-02 02:15 PM

Each word paints a picture of pure beauty. I didn't see the photo until I was done reading the poetry -- and you, my friend, are a talented word artist.

I love this painting you painted.

xoxoxo
Ali

Margherita
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Eternity

9 posted 2008-03-03 07:35 AM

Thank you for the smiles you brought my dear loving Poet friends! I send

back at each of you, with a big hug.

Love.
Margherita

poddarku
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india

10 posted 2008-03-08 11:34 AM

“after riding the white mare
along the paths of desire”- this is all I need. I rise from the sea of depression. From my hair the salt of grief dropping still. Thank you for your poem that shows the power of beauty.
“with heart and soul
a tiny offspring of the Whole”- you have so correct, dearest. We are the tiny bits of the eternity and as such are the ethereal light of eternity ourselves.

clever talks delay friendship!

Margherita
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Eternity

11 posted 2008-03-08 01:40 PM

Thank you so much, dear Ku, for the warm reply!
Take care.
Love.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2008-03-09 05:12 PM

Luscious...James

Margherita
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Eternity

13 posted 2008-03-10 08:34 AM

Thank you, dear James, for stopping by and commenting so kindly.
Love. Have a great week!
Margherita

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-03-10 11:30 AM

Margherita- This is so lovely!-- This write is beautiful and pure!

ARCTIC WIND

Goldenrose
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15 posted 2008-03-10 11:42 AM

Margherita..i think a lot of what the others have said does this poem justice..i will say that it is epic..and one to cherish...thank you..

Peace be with you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

Marge Tindal

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16 posted 2008-03-10 12:03 PM

Margherita~
Oh my pretty Margherita
this is just lovely
You've caused *sighs* to come your way~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

vandana

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17 posted 2008-03-10 12:08 PM

nice

simon
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18 posted 2008-03-10 12:12 PM

Margherita this is so BIG...!!! loved it...

miscellanea
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OH

19 posted 2008-03-10 12:33 PM

Margherita,

   This shows nothing less than a magnificient penning of the greatness and beauty around us.  WoW!!!!

  (Thanks to Earth Angel, I'll try to remember to click the library box first when I post.  I, notoriously, forget to, and agree it'd be nice to have a way to fix it without showing my absent-mindedness.)

  Enjoyed immensely!

hugs,

misce'

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

20 posted 2008-03-10 05:44 PM

I particularly love the ending!:

"At the shore of your vastness...
inundated by infinity
I share in the breath of Universe."

sounds like a grand-fine touch of the "Universalism" paradigm to me
[we are one with each other, all of Gaia-life, and the cosmos...transience,
flux, 'interconnectedness'...are the 'certain certainties'!]

applause for this 'penning!

LadyTom
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21 posted 2008-03-10 05:52 PM

A wonderful one. How I missed this one.
Just beautiful. love the read.

Margherita
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Eternity

22 posted 2008-03-10 06:55 PM

Oh my, so many loving replies! Thank you all my dear Poet friends for telling me you enjoyed this one.

Vastness beyond Earth
boundless divine gifts shared
for receptive souls

Love.
Margherita

sewasham
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23 posted 2008-03-13 09:05 PM

Great! The picture just adds to the beauty of your words. Take care and Have fun. Steve

Margherita
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Eternity

24 posted 2008-03-14 08:37 AM

Thank you for passing by and commenting so kindly, dear Steve.
Love,
Margherita

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