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LynnFromCT
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since 2008-02-18
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CT, USA

0 posted 2008-03-02 10:34 AM



When midnight strikes the door is open..
and this ride through madness costs a token.
Welcome aboard the Night Creatures Train,
we'll begin our ride at Haunted Ghosts Plain,
where we hear the screams from the dead slaves
as we cross the top of their ancient graves.
Our first stop is on Dead Ghost land, where
everything you fear is at our command.
While evil visions dance through your head
the creatures of the night become undead.

Watch the virgin in white slowly dance,
a vampire grows excited by this chance.
She can't resist his porcelain charms,
so he takes her into his chalk white arms.
Ripping her dress, I'm gazing to see...
What he is doing, when he looks at me?
Is he waiting to hear my applause...
standing there with blood dripping from his jaws?
On this ride you'll see what demons do...
Come now darling, I have more to show you.

Riding on the train through darkened paths
knowing up ahead there'll be a blood bath.
Wolves out in packs waiting to attack,
the alpha male brings the dead bodies back.
Folks try to run away and escape
'cause the were's are beginning to change shape.
You won't outrun the creatures undead,
soon they will catch you and rip off your head.
They'll pass back'n forth your beating heart,
and the beast in me delights in this part.

Feasting on your heart causes a flood,
my jowls lengthen with the smell of fresh blood.
There's no point in running - I'll give chase
then gut you as I devour your face.
Just a bit up the road we must go
to sit down and watch The Night Creatures Show.
Demons await us at the far end,
just up the road there and around the bend.
At the bridge, they'll be waiting for you
They'll let you pass, but then follow you through.

Vamps, wolves, ghosts and zombies with no face,
welcome you to your final resting place -
where we sleep in day and roam at night
changing people with our devilish delights.
Hope that you don't think that we'd let you go;
if we did that, we wouldn't have a show.
Hell is your home starting with today...
and now your soul will be whisked far away.
Don't be frightened of what lies ahead...
There'll be no pain, cause your already dead.

© Copyright 2008 L.Ottanio - All Rights Reserved
firestorm
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since 2008-02-26
Posts 109

1 posted 2008-03-02 10:58 AM


a truly remarkable piece of work-printed it out to read again-
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-03-02 01:28 PM


Lynn, that was amazing, scary as hell but it won't stop me reading it again...I ever tell you I used to be a werewolf, but I'm all right Nowooo....  
LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
Posts 353
LA, CA
3 posted 2008-03-02 05:11 PM


wow, shivered!!!
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-03-02 06:34 PM


Chilling

ARCTIC WIND

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