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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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0 posted 2008-03-02 06:26 AM



“I love you“…. Such a flawless sound…
The promise of a tomorrow
A view into a future with nothing but happiness
Throughthick and thin…
For better or for worse…
Till the end of time…
How foolish we are at times
To believe that such wordsare real
When we hear them…
We feel no fear
No insecurities
No imperfection
No of anything
We just float into an unknown world of “LOVE”
How can we be so sure
As to the depth, the meaning
How do we reassure ourselves that love istrue
If actions speak louder than words
Then why do we need to hear them
Why does the mind needit
If the body feels it
And the soul connects to it

What if… the body no longer feels it
And the soul no longer connects to it…
And you no longer hear that flawless sound…
Doesthat mean the dream is over?

That the promise of a tomorrow
has faded into the unknown
That you no longer have a companion
And you stand alone once again
Or have we stood alone all this time
But was just lost in that flawless sound
Until we realized one day
That flawless sound wasjust passing by
for a temporary fix…

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-03-02 06:32 AM


Good job Jen, you summed all of us Love junkies up perfectly here,  we all need a regular fix.....

John

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2008-03-02 10:26 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-03-03 08:35 AM


I did too, I enjoyed your thoughts!

ARCTIC WIND

vandana
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4 posted 2008-03-03 11:48 AM


good read
f13rc373n4c17y
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5 posted 2008-03-03 09:06 PM


I enjoyed reading this too.  the mind is a complicated matter; it allows us to question an existence of something as you have done, oh so beautifully, here.  haha, now the hard part, answering your wonders of questions, because love is an individual thought, no matter what angle you look.
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