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the kitty named"Zelda"
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the kitty named"Zelda" |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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A kitty named “Zelda” Her paws, soft, are upon fallen gold Of rustling foliage. Cold sundown Turns around to a shadowy cottage. A cottage with a coach and love-strokes On the kitty back, softly, softly. “Zelda” calls a sonorous mistress. The kitty is coming back after Yet another adventure she won’t tell. Outside a night of murmur wakes aloud. The cottage of a coach and love-strokes Remains amid burst of dark unknowns. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I like your Zelda, Po, she is smart and very intelligent!  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Ku that is nice....However, I have a problem with the images it conjures up. This is due to trying to envisage cottages in India ( Possibly because I live in aa old cottage myself) it is a shame because it distracts me from the underlying message. Can I suggest you modify your profile and remove the reference to your location? Cheers John |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Zelda will wear this intriguing poem proudly, dear Poddar! I love the images you created around the cat's mystery. Every cat loves a couch and love strokes, if she doesn't get it she will fall into melancholy... and this works for humans too, doesn't it? Cats are wondrous creatures and you caught their character well with this write. They keep their secrets well. But they "see" much more than humans, as you seem to know. You did a lovely job here! love and smiles Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love cats myself!-- You can tell because I wrote two poems about my little fluffy friends! lol They are just so cute...ARCTIC WIND |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
ah, the Cat!!!! beautiful, my dear friend. more between the lines. Fine poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Her paws, soft, are upon fallen gold Of rustling foliage. Cold sundown Turns around to a shadowy cottage." ~ A very inviting intro to your "kitty" poem!   Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"kitty is coming back after Yet another adventure she won’t tell." Smiling here, as that IS her job, to be independent and 'free' to explore the world. (Some humans need more 'kitty' attitude.) |
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