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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-03-02 04:23 AM



you leave love words on my mornings
that smile my inner sides with satisfaction
in a way that is not quite proper
for a proper girl with manners
and from ten times one thousand miles
they carry their dulcet tones
with ever changing hues
that brighten my day
and warm my heart

I think the wonderful of you is simply wonderful…


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2008-03-02 04:28 AM


Fine romantic writing...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-03-02 04:40 AM


James.. thank you ... I think though, you are the fine romantic writer here on these pages blue...    love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2008-03-02 05:14 AM


And this is truly wonderful too!
poddarku
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4 posted 2008-03-02 05:25 AM


this poem has painted the feeling with flair. wonderful lines like: "that smile my inner sides with satisfaction"- echoes in my ears

clever talks delay friendship!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-03-02 05:28 AM


Helen and Poddarku... thank you both for your lovely comments on my work... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

effjayel
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6 posted 2008-03-02 06:28 AM



quote:
that smile my inner sides with satisfaction

Dear RDB, what wonderful composition, I especially like the line above, that sums up how I feel when I visit this place.  Thanks for sharing

John x

Ps, Thanks also for the e mail, I'll reply later........

simon
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7 posted 2008-03-02 06:34 AM


Did very much enjoy this Roniece, does this bare a nod to Elvis? The title had me thinking that straight away...
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-03-02 06:36 AM


thank you John....  and you make me smile tooo..      love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-03-02 06:37 AM


thanks Simon...   no, not Elvis I'm afraid, but I do like his music!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-03-02 07:06 AM


ms r & b, it is a treat to see this side of you  slip in and out of the horizon, please continue
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11 posted 2008-03-02 10:25 AM


Ah, dear Roniece, love knows no distance and you are the living proof of this truth. You say it lovingly and with your usual charm.

love
Margherita

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12 posted 2008-03-02 11:28 AM


"I think the wonderful of you is simply wonderful…", dear Roneice!!!

With love,
Linda

HopeS
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13 posted 2008-03-02 11:58 AM


Wonderful loving sentiments expressed

Hope

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-03-02 01:16 PM


Dear RDB,

I think this long distance love poem works so very well.

Bobby

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15 posted 2008-03-02 01:40 PM


beautifully written!

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16 posted 2008-03-02 01:52 PM


Lovely write... very expressive.
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17 posted 2008-03-02 03:20 PM


"you leave love words on my mornings"

Oh, Roniece, this is beautiful.  It's a wonderful line that simply captured me.  I really like this poem but I fell in love with that one line.

A

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18 posted 2008-03-02 03:38 PM


This is wonderful RDB!

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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19 posted 2008-03-02 07:05 PM


oh my! such wonderful comments you all have left for me on my morning.. thank you so very much Mr Daark, Margherita, Lindalou, Hope, Bobby, Dixie, TD, Ali-girl, and Michael   you have all made my day ever so brighter!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LindsayP
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20 posted 2008-03-02 09:48 PM



A proper girl indeed, I'm sure you wouldn't

do anything that wasn't proper Roniece and

you brighten everyone's day. Great write.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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21 posted 2008-03-03 01:23 AM


ah yes, a good proper girl never tells all !   thanks Lindsay for the smile you have left me with   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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22 posted 2008-03-07 05:22 PM


If there is anything wonderful where you are concerned Roniece it is your heart...and your poetry..what a pleasure it is to know that i am on the same planet as you? Let alone have the unique pleasure to converse with you..i thank you for that..for your poetry and for being uniquely YOU..thank you..

Goldenrose.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

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23 posted 2008-03-08 07:40 PM


interesting 'write!'

I am especially fond of:

"words...

from ten times one thousand miles
...carry their dulcet tones
with ever changing hues
that brighten my day
and warm my heart"

applause!

Rick
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24 posted 2008-03-09 04:11 AM


Dear Roniece, this is stunning, very much enjoyed your joy in this one, came through loud and clear, was romantic, sensual and full of life, very well done my friend, thank you for sharing this.

Rick

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