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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-03-01 05:05 PM


        


Sir knight, is this a single flame?
sparked by one true love long ago,where love,
was untame, burning hot love without shame,
love of deepest loves do you speak of?
My existance remained a veil over my heart
shadowed in darkness beating slowly alone--
unitl your words pierced the deepest part
melting thy ice cold chambers of flesh & bone.
yet thy true love has always staked his claim--
For around his neck he bares the token
wrapped in ribbbons of scarlet red upon a chain,
For thee my passion spilled, three words spoken,
Upon your lips I release my quivering kiss--
Kiss me now--or die without knowing loves eternal bliss!


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-01-2008 08:46 PM).]

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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-03-01 05:41 PM


ARH, This is very lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2008-03-01 05:55 PM


    

Thank you Arctic!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-01-2008 07:02 PM).]

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-03-01 06:19 PM


You do live up to your name dear ARH with this passionate write!

Hope you had a great Birthday party and that the celebrations made you happy.

love
Margherita

simon
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4 posted 2008-03-01 06:28 PM


wow! loved it...
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2008-03-01 06:41 PM




Thank You Mar~Yes I had a good Birthday!
thanks for acknowledgeing my birthday and for the birthday wishes!

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2008-03-01 06:51 PM


  

Thank you simon


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-01-2008 07:46 PM).]

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-03-01 08:46 PM


I didn't See that!. Happy late Birthday! lol



ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2008-03-01 08:49 PM


LOL! you make me laugh Arctic...thank you!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-03-02 04:18 AM


Well if you put it that way, I shall...James
effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
10 posted 2008-03-02 07:01 AM


WOW! ARH, back with a bang.I love the words & the pics....sorry I missed your birthday, I was otherwise engaged, hope you had a good one, please find below your belated Gif !

John

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A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 2008-03-02 04:01 PM


Oh James..you romantic devil you...lol!

Thanks ~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
12 posted 2008-03-02 04:08 PM


John you are so sweet~thanks for my gif and yes its suits me well! I heard about your little hospital trip...I do hope all is well
for you, thanks it is so great to have someone who is new to pip to send me birthday wishes~
  

~ARH


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

effjayel
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13 posted 2008-03-02 04:56 PM


ARH, everything is good with me, glad you liked the Gif, John
PrestonThePoet
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14 posted 2008-03-03 04:24 PM


So enthralling.
I'm at a loss of words.

Preston

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