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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-03-01 04:07 PM


Felix is way fed-up
with the life he’s led,
and what he’s had to do
just to stay alive.  

The so called “glamorous” life
of a street child
is not as much fun
as some unknowing people
would have you believe.  

It’s dead boring as hell,
and Felix wants out.  

However
there is no way
for him to escape.

Bobby

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2008-03-01 04:10 PM


Perhaps, moving to the woods would be the only escape. But there are always issues out in the woods as well.
Thanks for sticking around, Mr Jordan, with the continuing saga of Felix and gang.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-03-01 04:14 PM


The poor kid! ~ Literally and otherwise! It's a shame how children like him slip through the cracks of our 'society'!!!

His plight makes me want to clean him, clothe him, feed him, teach him ~ and love him.

Love & Child Light,

Linda

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2008-03-01 04:15 PM


fine continuance of the Felix saga!

(is there a way for any of us to 'escape'...
  I'm still looking for that river to skate
  away on)

applause!

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-03-01 04:16 PM


Midnitesun,

Thanks for your words on this.  Yes, there are issues in the woods.  I don't think Felix could survive there, I know I couldn't.

You are the kind, and pretty young lady who talked me into staying.  

Felix and I thank you for that.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-03-01 04:20 PM


I often find myself thinking this about people that seem to be in precarious situations...some seem to be content where they are, but some would surely escape if they could find a way...and I believe that day will come as they seek it...James
Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-03-01 04:27 PM


Earth Angel,

Thanks for the kind words, and for caring about Felix.

“Love & Child Light” back to you Hon.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2008-03-01 04:32 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

Escaping is very hard to do for any of us.  However, if you want it bad enough, you will find a way to skate out.

Thanks for liking this part of the saga.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-03-01 04:36 PM


James,

You've got the right idea.  If you want it bad enough, there is at least an ever so small chance of success.

Luck plays a large part in what happens to anyone.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-03-01 07:07 PM


oh ...that's a bit sad Bobby... but remember you told me Felix is strong so he will find a way to make himself happy again for sure.... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LadyTom
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10 posted 2008-03-01 07:15 PM


Poor Felix.  I hope that the boredom  did not lead to trouble. Worried!!!
Tomtoo

simon
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11 posted 2008-03-01 07:22 PM


Bobby,

we're starting to gain insight into how Felix FEELS. That was all that was previously missing and now we know him that much more. It's a pleasure to know him...

Margherita
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12 posted 2008-03-01 07:24 PM


The enduring of poverty and the conditions of Felix's childhood seem never-ending while he is stuck there, but life does not stagnate and so we can hope and trust that he finds the way to escape and is helped in this attempt.
It should happen nowhere in the world, yet it continues to happen. So sad, dear Bobby.

love
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2008-03-01 07:55 PM


Dear RDB,

Yes, he is a strong child, and eventually he will be happy again.  All my stories have happy endings.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-03-01 07:59 PM


Dear Lady Tom,

I’m afraid the “trouble” is what is boring him.  If you mean, will he eventually kill someone.  That is a possibility.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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15 posted 2008-03-01 08:01 PM


Simon,

It is a pleasure for Felix to know you.  I’m glad you now know him better than you did.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2008-03-01 08:03 PM


Dear Margherita,

You are correct, it does continue to happen, and it is sad.

There are many Felix's here in the hood.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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17 posted 2008-03-02 03:32 AM


Children are often born into a world of no voice, no choice and like you said Bobby, luck plays a part in wheather they escape or not no matter how much they might want to escape. Good example would be "Baby Grace" in Texas. She wasn't even thre years old and didn't stand a chance.
                                      Ida

effjayel
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18 posted 2008-03-02 07:08 AM


Bobby

You may need to gently remind Felix how strong he really is.  We all know this to be true having followed / kept an eye on him over these past few weeks. He is a fighter & survivor and just needs to keep believing that things will get better...Keep the faith Felix, I'm relying on you. BTW, if you take to the hills, I'm going to come looking for you & drag you right back here where you belong, we need you !

John

Robert E. Jordan
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19 posted 2008-03-02 09:13 AM


Ida,

Thanks Hon, what you say is very true.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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20 posted 2008-03-02 09:16 AM


John,

Thanks for the kind words on this one.  I hope you're feeling great.

Don't worry, Felix isn't going anywhere.  He can't afford the bus fare anyway.

Bobby

effjayel
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21 posted 2008-03-02 01:46 PM


Bobby, Thanks my friend  & I feel really good...You tell Felix he has a choice, he can either call me & I will pick him up or call a cab and send me the bill...

John


Robert E. Jordan
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22 posted 2008-03-02 04:52 PM


Thanks John,

I'll let Felix know.  If he's ever over that way, he'll be in touch.

It's great you're feeling better.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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23 posted 2010-03-11 01:01 AM


Unfortunately, there are too many children like Felix.  May they find someone to take care of them.
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