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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Today I sing of you under the flow of pure water removing all trace of past scents, in anticipation of your touch of silk. Then, for the rest of the day, I’ll wear you impressed upon my smile for all to see, while moving weightlessly upon the soft cloud of your fragrance, which carries silent whispers, eloquent like fragments of sighs .... you would not dare to voice. * |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, you are lovely when you love...enjoyed it |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Spring is in the air & the love birds are calling you I think...Very nicely put John x |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Margherita!! this is beautiful as are you ! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your illustrious ink is delicately provocative! I love how your pen parries and teases and titillates! Delightful penning, Maga Margherita!   Angelo Terrestre |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Margharita, You use your third laguage so much better than most people use their first. I always enjoy your poems and your command of the language. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear D., yes I do love, can't do without! It's my favorite poetry topic I would say ... Dear John, thank you! Yes I feel the Spring air ... actually not today, it pours water from a grey sky ... Dear Roniece, thank you, sweet romantic girl! Dear Linda, thank you, my Angelo Terrestre for the smiles! Parry?? hmmmm so yanno what I am talking about?  pssssst! The inspiration behind this is ... will tell you sometime later! heheheDear Ida, you make me blush with your kind words. I do love the English language and I enjoy using it! love Margherita |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
beautiful, my dear lady. This is very soft and romantic.., how nice to read it in the morning!!  |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it is just getting better.the tickle of water can be felt and so is the immortal love. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, Pure water can sometimes do that. Perhaps remove even the smell of brimstone, and sewer gas. Nice work on this inspiring poem. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very lovely poem Margherita! I cant wait until Spring! ARCTIC WIND |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Magical imagery gal! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pretty words flow with your water thoughts |
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PrestonThePoet Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 87 |
Im quite impressed. I never could form such an mind-numbing arrangement of words. Beautiful Piece. Preston |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear LadyTom, thank you for your loving morning comment! Dear Poddar, thank you for the nice comment. Immortal love? Wow, that would be something VAST … like Divine Love. On this level of existence we might be comforted by the thought that every moment lived in love has its own eternity. Dear Bobby, thank you for taking the time to comment so kindly on this one. Brimstone smell and sewer gas?? Eeeeek … under the shower I feel as light as a dove … a peace dove! Always ready to soar. Arctic Wind, thank you dear, here Spring is really in the air … and of course it influences the heart too. Dear TD, thank you for your sweet comment. Dear James, Aloha! Thank you! Dear Michele, thank you, I very much enjoy your visits, Poetess! Dear Preston, thank you so much! Mind-numbing? I’ll tell you how the receiver end of this little poem will react when he will read it tomorrow …  Love to all and have a wonderful Sunday! Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Margherita your happiness shines through your writing, I am so pleased for you dear lady. have a wonderrful day. Lindsay |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita And to think that I almost missed this one. It's lovely - sensual and soft. I love this. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Lindsay, thank you for your loving comment. Dear Alison, thank you, I am glad you enjoyed this. He said nothing yet!! love Margherita |
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baohan New Member
since 2008-03-01
Posts 5Hochiminh City, Vietnam |
Wow, this create such beauty emphasis on me. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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