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poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-03-01 02:59 AM

look up at the sky

This time of the afternoon
She has to jump down
From her verandah.
Each and every day.
A fatal cloud on the sun.

Her doctor reminds her of
The lovely husband,
The small love island,
The pet named Henry.
Still her sun sets early

On a mossy verandah.
That was made before
Her father was born.
Each and every day.
A fatal cloud on the sun.

Lady, look up at the sky…

clever talks delay friendship!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-03-01 04:22 AM

yes, I like to look at the sky... nice heartwords here Poddarku... love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-03-01 04:55 AM

Clouds across the sun are hauntingly beautiful, very ethereal images here Ku, much enjoyed...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-03-01 06:53 AM

Enigmatically appealing, dear Poddar.

I love the scenery very much and the suggestion of this daily meeting with fate.

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2008-03-01 07:25 AM

Keep up the gentle reminders to look up at the sky. Perhaps, once she does, she will never look down again.

A sensitive, sad ~ yet hopeful! ~ piece of writing, dear Poddarku.