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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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my mind drifts on sandstone waterfalls like reading books with deep ink indentions the words one can feel when blinded by love then you whisper about green grass meadows and puppy feet dancers playing uncovering treasures I can only imagine but my mouth waters it's wanting anyway and you bring me a basket of kisses the slow melting kind with coatings as you lean over my imagination's sides short hemming a horizon without evening a slow study of wanting more than shows and you wear my mind as welcomed glancing ______________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think every woman wears your mind  at the very least...they try it on  |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Very romantic and beautiful and soft. enjoyed the read as always. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
beautiful poem but your pic still creeps me out a bit LOL! ~Zach~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe for letting your eyes into this one. _____________ ladyTom, thank you for touching this ink splatter _________________ friend rain...maybe in time it won't..as it won't change...it is the real me...thanks for the read |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
the robes of wanting piled on the floor, crumpled there in glancing reveal. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi, bring me the wanting eyes let me touch them with knowing thoughts, thanks babe for looking in |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
but my mouth waters it's wanting anyway and you bring me a basket of kisses the slow melting kind with coatings mmmmm.... so, would that be strawberry or chocolate Mr Daark?  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b...it is the heart sigh kind, the addicting kind...thank you ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Ohh, this view of waters is of the kind that moves me to tears! Smiles and tears mixed, like when watching pure beauty. love Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you babe for the read and reply. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm.... and I always thought strawberrys were the addicting kind for me Mr Daark.... xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b...then strawberries it is....among other treats..thanks ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D You make me smile with your poetry. The words you write and how you use them makes me just read slowly and savor them. I like this and I smiled. A |
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PrestonThePoet Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 87 |
I've never read a piece with such flow, and tenacity. Such beauty in every word. Each changing and bringing new surprises. Amazing. Preston |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one for leaning over and whispering __________________ friend preston, thank you sir for the comments |
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