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Open Poetry #42

Love or Lust

sephiroth
New Member

since 2008-02-23

Posts 4

0 posted 2008-02-28 11:58 AM

A love so secret, veiled and dark
hidden deep within my heart
yet i think i may be wrong
about my heart, my love, my song

Is it naught but lustful yearning,
a base desire my heart is learning
is it love or is it lust
to find the truth i think i must

search my black and tattered soul
and make the truth my one true goal
until at last my colours show
but, i guess till then i'll never know

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-02-28 02:24 PM

Sephiroth,

I’d advise using Standard English Language capitalization and punctuation. “Essentials of English” by Hopper, Gale, Foote, and Griffith is good and not expensive.

You might be able to pick it up at a library.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (02-28-2008 05:17 PM).]

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-28 03:40 PM

love the read.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-02-28 05:12 PM

If you spend lots of time thinking about sex, its lust...if you spend lots of time in appreciation, caring, acceptance, concern, these are fruits of love...lust is right there in a moment, love needs time to grow...just thoughts...James

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