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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-02-28 06:51 AM

Imagine The Way I Feel

They must have a reason
Has this been planned
Having no idea as to why
Its hard to understand

No explanation was given
Which seems strange
The unexpected happens
Yet I noted the change

Had something happened
They could not reveal
So much was left unsaid
Imagine the way I feel

Silence came as a shock
It was never expected
As I still remember when
Our hearts connected

Hope © 2008
The poem with graphic at the URL below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91031830.html

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-02-28 09:45 AM

"Silence came as a shock
It was never expected
As I still remember when
Our hearts connected"
I always find something in your words that I can relate to, and it always touches my heart

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-02-28 10:41 AM

I understand the pain in your heart, such a situation is not easy to deal with. You write with great skill and sensitivity, dear Hope.

love and hugs
Margherita

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2008-02-28 04:10 PM

A very emotional write...enjoyed and empathize.

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

4 posted 2008-02-28 04:41 PM

beautiful, enjoyed the read.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2008-02-28 05:38 PM

Dear Hope, I know this, the silence is deafening, one changes, the other not wanting to ask why in case they part, two people caught in a relationship, who would be better off apart.
Good read my friend, funny how often we all feel very much the same and connected.

Rick

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2008-02-28 07:37 PM

Dear Hope, I would like to echo all the

above comments. You always write with such

feeling, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

7 posted 2008-02-28 09:08 PM

I have had this feeling before. It is good to write it out, isn't it?

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-02-28 09:40 PM

A very emotional Write hope!

Very beautifully Penned

ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

9 posted 2008-02-29 12:32 PM

Hope, I can tell that one came from way down deep inside, the really good ones always do don’t you think?
John

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