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A pebble
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A pebble |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
A pebble Under the blue moon I watch you. I watch your stillness Through the passing water. How many years of your silence Were how much love I held In my dream. If I could pick you up To make a good throw, Would you sink To the deepest bottom of my heart After two or three ripples To anchor my thought? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tom, that was incredibly romantic!!! ~ and so uniquely creative and poetic! Simply lovely ~ and adorable!  Warm hug 'n a BIG smile! Linda  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
TomMark, This is very nice. What a lucky pebble that would be. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, Tom. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WONDERFUL Tom!  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Tom, I am happy to see you post a poem!! And what a poem!! It is magical, Tom! Truly, deeply captivating. I will keep it. love Margherita |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I agree with all the previous comments & I am slightly envious of anyone who can say so much with so few words... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bao~ Dear lady ... this is so lovely~ Your pen is putting down some lovely ink in this one~ Have a beautiful day ... a better tomorrow ... and a wonderful weekend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thomas, you old romantic you! I adore this, Well done my friend, you are not a pebble, you are a rock !! it reminded me of a line from an old CSN song, “ My love is an anchor tied to you, tied with a silver chain...” Fine writing.... John |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write!'... Watching stillness under a blue moon?!... now, I REALLY like that! Applause!! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
deepest of our love is like a pebble and it is easy to throw it away. beautiful writting clever talks delay friendship! |
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